'Wonder Woman' Pilot: Script Review

'Wonder Woman' Pilot: Script Review

Travis Yanan has the advanced Wonder Woman script review and judging from the same it's nowhere near the train wreck people expected. It's definitely worth a read so check it out:

For the most part... the script works. Diana has an emotional journey. She can't go home, even if she wanted to... and there are times she does. She misses home and family after having left to both right the injustices of the modern world and to follow Steve Trevor, the one person from our world who someone managed to enter hers. So, yes, there are obligatory E.T. and Wizard of Oz references... at times, it's played too hard. Diana still isn't over Steve Trevor, who isn't much of a presence in the pilot (mostly seen in flashback), but in series will probably come more to the forefront.

Not only does Diana have an urge to go home, there are complications with being a superhero. She has a corporation that has merchandised Wonder Woman and the profits pay for her crime fighting (and many planes... if there are two salient character quirks about Diana as DEK envisions her, she likes her automotive toys, and she likes singing in the car/plane/whatever she's driving at the time). There's even an amusing bit about Diana complaining in a doll product line meeting that the boobs on the doll are too big and it pisses her off because even though she knows the research shows big boobs sell more dolls, when people meet her in person, they are... disappointed. And that hurts. As well it should.

Diana also has a best girlfriend, Myndi Mayer, who is the PR whiz at the company. There's a LOT of potential for a Xena/Gabrielle relationship here. Which I would be all for.

While everyone knows that Diana Themyscira and Wonder Woman are one and the same, Diana has a third persona, Diana Prince. This is a normal, lonely girl with a barely-lived in one-bedroom apartment. She puts on conservative clothing, brown contact lenses and glasses, pulls back her hair... and suddenly no one recognizes her. It makes sense to have this escape, normal persona, but it's underrepresented in the pilot. Diana as CEO and as Wonder Woman simply has too much to do. It's important to establish this side of Diana's life for series, and I know it's part of pretty much every iteration of Wonder Woman, but it seems largely tacked on here and may leave those unfamiliar with the character's mythology scratching their heads. She uses it to go out to a bar with Myndi once, then drives into work

There is reference the old costume, too (Lynda Carter version, not... shiny leggings, blue high heel boots version). Diana, in our world, is aging. She won't be able to do this forever. And she can't believe she used to wear that thing.

It's almost refreshing to have a genuine superhero show (as opposed to just a "super power show") that allows for a level of earnestness and camp.

And there is camp. Particularly when it comes to the villain of the piece, Veronica Cale, who runs a Big Pharma company and is trying to create supersoldiers to take Wonder Woman down. Where their animosity comes from... who knows. Veronica's scenes are pretty much just her twirling a mustache while her henchman listens to her wax on about how much she hates Wonder Woman. The action scenes, particularly the final "Wonder Woman versus 20 super-soldier experiment subjects," play as camp, too. I half expected to see "BAM!" "POW!" and "FLRBBBBB!" The opening action scene, involving Wonder Woman chasing down a suspect (through Hollywood Boulevard, including a run-in with the Hollywood Boulevard "Wonder Woman" and "Marilyn Monroe") has its camp value, too.

Where the script truly stumbles, and also intrigues, is on the subject of Wonder Woman's vigilantism. She's subpoenaed by the Senate to speak about the constitutionality of her actions (for me, an intriguing question... is the Lasso of Truth akin to torture? It's touched on but not delved into) and whether she's in fact working for the "militaristic" LAPD. This basically just gives Diana an opportunity to grandstand about the failings and corruption government, about how we're willing as a society to sell sex but not safe sex, how police departments were being cut while the US cut bailout checks to Wall Street, how politicians' pockets are lined by various companies (of course, specifically referencing Veronica Cale here). Yes, you knew it was coming. It's a DEK script, after all. Of course she grandstands.

There are also some truly groan inducing parts of the script. Particularly, at least for me, was the presentation of "the Animals," aka the young kids who work as Diana's "evidence team." Brilliant, young minds who... take dance breaks from their geek wizardry work. They dress sloppy and keep their workplace even sloppier (i.e. pizza boxes scattered everywhere). Because I guess that's how David E. Kelley sees 20-somethings? And Diana feels the need to talk "gangsta" to these fools. She got bidness. GROAN.

But besides the classic DEK grandstanding, the two-dimensional villain, and the Animals... honestly, I think this could be a lot of fun.

And thank god they changed that costume...

Thanks to Travis, and make sure you check his blog for other script reviews on the upcoming shows.